klayness's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Swarming Tutorial]

nice job.

Nice job on the tutorial, I liked how you explained everything instead of just giving the code, I understood almost everything and enjoyed reading the tutorial good work, I hope for more quality tutorials from you in the future!
just one thing though, i wasn't quite sure whether or not to put the MC on the stage or not, or where to put the script, so I'll pm you.

PARAGON-pvp responds:

You don't put the MC on the stage, and where you put the script, is easy, the whole movie is a blank keyframe, and put the script in that blank keyframe. hope this helps, any other questions, PM me.

PARAGON_pvp

[(G) Pac-Snake]

Good game.

I liked the snake engine. Where the tail grows quite a bit each time, and the scoring was cool too. almost identical to the cell-phone versions. what can i say, i enjoyed it, and the pac-man theme was cool to. The only thing to be improved i think would be the sound.
p.s: got 270 :D

Sharkius-Cubed responds:

Ok, thanks for the advice.

[Can you review?]

good for noobs, but i din't need it.

good job, i guess, it's just that you made it a little too obvious which one is the most proper way to say it. i woulden't have said "okay, but" i would have said "awesome work!" then given my honest opinion which is that it rocked, then maybe give a slight suggestion. oh well, it's a good movement towards better reviews.

PARAGON-pvp responds:

Well thanks for the review, i was using the "okay, but" for a example on what to say for a sub-average flash submission, because it's easier to write a review on a good flash because all you're doing is saying AWESOME JOB! and stuff like that,, thanks again for the review

PARAGON_pvp

[Fun Platformer Game V.3]

cool.

nice job. it looks like it might be stolen from AS. o r g, but you put a lot of work into it anyway with all of the graphics. you should change the amount of time alloted, because whenever i play it says 0 time, there wasn't enough for the average player to get to the end. also the falling time is a majour drag, and instead of submitting a new version you could have updated the old one. the bug, though, WAS gone. (on level one)

PeteZahut responds:

Ya, thanks for the good review and I'm gonna ask some people I know who have played my game. If I need to I will add more time. Thanks for letting me know about that.

[Denvish: Powers of a Mod]

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exactly, and this is crap. i mean, just because you are a flash author and he isn't dosent make your crappy flash any better. its just somebody elses song and a simple game engine. not really all that interesting or fun. besides, you dont have 18 in the portal you only have 5. well, maybe 4 or 5 that made it and 13 that were blammed.
graphics : text, the crappiest gun ive ever seen, and bad quality bmp images.
style: copied stuff, no style
sound: cool music, but you practically base your game off of its succes.
violence: N/A
interactivity: for this, not a bad job but the gun should have Y axis movement.
humor: n/a

SpamBurgeralt responds:

I do have 18 submissions. I just have 5 on my alt.

[--: mr cash :--]

huh?

wasnt this JUST submitted by somebody else? if its the same guy then speak up and reply or ill whistle it.

simsi responds:

yes its me (dyljos) i just used my simsi name cos i already submitted two games today!!!

[The Magic 8 Ball]

cewl.

haha you ccan actually have conversations with it. nice job.

Funbumb responds:

lol kinda.

[Duck Hunt, now with Cows!]

awesome

hehe! that was funny. however you cnt put it on ng without expecting it to get harshly rated. but i liked, and thought that the concept was funny. good, origional graphics, and nice usage of modes it was fun and entertaining. good job for a first! you managed to not skim in any of the subjects of sound, graphics, style, violence, humor and interactivity, and that is very hard to do. A++ (considering it was your first)

dancer4ever responds:

Thank you!

[The Ultimate Backmask]

funny and scary

OMFG! that was awesome!! i cant believe it! half of them were satanic or subliminal. i wonder how many of them were purposefull? almost all of them. ive been listening to satanic rap everytime i turned on my tv during childhood :(. thats scary songwriters would do that!

TJN001 responds:

yeah, its cool how they do that